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Tom this is meant as constructive criticism - you need to spell check on your website, read the sentences as you have a full stop where it should not be and you have missed a capital letter for your sponsor. It's all part of presenting yourself in the best light. I do hope you go from success to success. I have followed your wins and you are doing very well.
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Website looks good Tom.
One point .... 'representing there brand a lot' should read 'representing their brand a lot' and 'yourself' is one word. Brand owners do like English used correctly.
Your trophy cabinet looks pretty well stocked. Good luck with your goal of getting to the the Olympics, it takes total dedication and focus and I wish you the best in that regard.
This is a bit of an old farts club at times so you'll have to forgive them that!
One point .... 'representing there brand a lot' should read 'representing their brand a lot' and 'yourself' is one word. Brand owners do like English used correctly.
Your trophy cabinet looks pretty well stocked. Good luck with your goal of getting to the the Olympics, it takes total dedication and focus and I wish you the best in that regard.
This is a bit of an old farts club at times so you'll have to forgive them that!
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